marguerite_26: (writing smut)
[livejournal.com profile] vaysh11 has posted an interesting discussion about speech tags over on her journal.

It's always a topic I find interesting. And I'll admit that when reading the use of speech tags and the punctuating of dialogue is something that I notice immediately. And at times it can make or break a story for me.

Okay, speech tags can never really 'make' a story good. They should be ~invisible to the reader, really. It's when they make me notice them (or lack of them) that there's a problem.

ANYWAY. Interesting post and plenty to discuss because, like adverbs, there's lots of room for discussion about the proper handling of these things. Go check it out.

'Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue.
The line of dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in.'
~ Elmore Leonard


"Do you agree?" Maggie whispered into the abyss.

[ETA: in case I wasn't clear, the merits of that quote are what are discussed in detail (with examples) in Vaysh's post]
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This is a note to myself (and a copy and paste from a beta comment). I need these handy so I can refer to them and stop making the same damn mistake. Feel free to scroll on past and mock me quietly. Or if you make these mistakes, see also Lay vs Laid.

Raise and Rose - an explanation that worked for me )

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