This needs a bit of explanation. I sometimes share my fics with my family as they are Harry Potter fans as well. I will often simply tweak the ending as bit (read: remove the p0rn) and send it off to them. I do this because while my sisters could likely handle a bit o’ sex, these stories have a way of later ending up with my brother-in-law, my nephew… MY MOTHER! So edit when I can or, as is often the case, don’t share.
With
Burn, Burn I knew my sisters would really like the concept of the fic and I had a lot invested in it so I made a point of creating a version for them. I needed to do quite a bit of changes, specifically removing the bondage and the sex, while still keeping the theme of healing and solace that I had in the original.
I decided to post this here as well because I know bondage isn’t everyone’s cup of tea. Maybe someone who passed over the original would enjoy this version instead. Also this gives access to the fic for anyone under-age. For anyone reading both out of curiosity, you will find Part I identical.
The original and really how the fic is intended to be read, is here:
Burn, Burn And now the edited version:
Author:
marguerite_26Title: Burn, Burn (abridged)
Pairing(s): H/D
Rating: PG-13 (for disturbing imagery)
Summary: The tireless dance of the flame, random and hypnotic, burned Draco’s retinas but he refused to look away. Closer, closer he reached until his palm hovered above the tiny flame. Three, two, then one inch away.
Warnings (if any): Disturbing imagery, self-mutilation, pre-slash
Total word count: 9000
Original prompt request number: 98 by
tiger_irisDisclaimer: This story/artwork is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books, Raincoat Books, and Warner Bros. Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.Author's Note: Special thanks to
eynhashofet for reviewing this version.
( Burn, Burn (abridged) )