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For [livejournal.com profile] hermette – A very quick something as a thank you for my lovely new icon. ♥ I tried to write a 30-word tiny ficlet but ended up with this instead. :)

Title Ten Things Merlin Loves About Arthur’s Hands
Rating: G
Word Count: 400

Ten Things Merlin Loves About Arthur’s Hands

  • They never stop moving while he talks to his knights by the campfire; they are on his jaw, his cheek, his lips. It’s too much, and Merlin must look away and focus on turning the spit or the rabbit will burn.


  • One moment they can clench the hilt of a sword like the safety of all Camelot depends on their skill and the next they can stroke the dirty cheek of a child whose father lies dead only a few feet away.


  • The way they tremble sometimes after Arthur's spoken to his father. Merlin has to stop himself from taking hold of them and whispering, “You are not him. You will never be him.”


  • On lonely winter nights, when Arthur thinks Merlin is distracted with the filth of the hearth or the endless piles of armour to polish, he takes out his mother’s locket – the one, Merlin discovered, Arthur had stolen from the king’s chambers – and he strokes a finger up and down the ivory with such longing that Merlin’s heart aches.


  • The familiar weight of them on Merlin’s shoulders as Arthur stands close and whispers something important or something ridiculous.


  • The way he rubs his ring across his bottom lip back and forth as he stands on the barracks, watching his people. Merlin thinks he can see the king inside, taking shape right before his eyes.


  • The silver line of the scar on his left index finger that Arthur tells visiting noble women was the result of a bite from an angry boar, but Merlin knows Arthur’s knife had slipped trying to cut the laces of his breeches when he’d needed his chamber pot too badly to fiddle with the knot.


  • The soft beat Arthur’s fingers drum on the side of the tub while Merlin washes his hair. Merlin figures it's a prince's equivalent to purring.


  • The way they run through Merlin's hair to pluck out a blade of grass or hay only to hold it out, accusing, in front of Merlin nose while Arthur says, “Idiot,” with his cheeks pink and eyes soft.


  • Best of all, Merlin sees in his dreams the way, someday, Arthur’s hand will fit into his, strong and gentle. Together their hands will be puzzle pieces slotting into place, perfect and invincible.

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    Date: 2010-09-07 12:52 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
    Aww! Loved it!

    Date: 2010-09-07 01:55 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    *hugs* Thank you, dear. :)

    Date: 2010-09-07 01:06 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] hermette.livejournal.com
    :melts into a puddle:

    So sweet and sensual and completely fucking perfect. Oh, Merlin.

    &hearts ___ &hearts

    Date: 2010-09-07 01:56 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    hee! Glad you liked it. I LUFF THESE BOYS AND THEIR GORGEOUS HANDS.

    Date: 2010-09-07 01:25 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] treacle-tartlet.livejournal.com
    This is made of spun sugar and sparklyhearts.

    And I love the icon! I have a tote bag with an octopus!owl on it :)

    Date: 2010-09-07 01:57 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    This is made of spun sugar and sparklyhearts.

    LOL. *hands you a toothbrush*

    OCTOPUS!OWL's will one day take over the world!!! It's TRUE.

    Date: 2010-09-07 02:07 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] mpoetess.livejournal.com
    Cutting the laces. You know me, I'm always going to just inhale the sweet ones silently, then clamp onto the hilarious one and never let go.

    Date: 2010-09-07 02:17 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    *beams*

    that one might be my favourite, too. :D

    Date: 2010-09-07 02:23 pm (UTC)
    ext_3626: (merlin - hearts arthur)
    From: [identity profile] frogspace.livejournal.com
    That made me smile. :)

    (Also, my first thought was "Word Count: 400", that can't be right. Shouldn't it be 40,000? Heh. Too much Big Bang! *g*)

    Date: 2010-09-07 02:27 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you! and ahaha!!! The only way I could manage a big bang would be if it allowed 400 word entries. :DDD


    Also- GAH!!! I've been seeing your recs!!! But I don't know what you are saying!!! *cries* I wanna know. *vows to learn German* :D

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    Date: 2010-09-07 06:01 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] nuclearsugars.livejournal.com
    This is so soft and beautiful. My fav is the 4th from last. :)

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:08 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    hee! I do like that one too. :D

    Date: 2010-09-07 06:17 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] accioslash.livejournal.com
    Oh, that's lovely. ♥

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:08 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you, sweetie. :D

    Date: 2010-09-07 08:45 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] minavox.livejournal.com
    This is wonderful - just the right mixture between hilarious and moving. Beautiful!

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:08 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Awe. Thanks so much. :)

    Date: 2010-09-07 08:57 pm (UTC)
    ext_512358: man peering around a book at two half-naked women (princesspea)
    From: [identity profile] starduchess.livejournal.com
    Awwww, so sweet! Such longing. Maybe one day soon, uh?

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:09 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    One day very soon. Especially since I'm sure Arthur has his own list about Merlin's hands. :D

    Ten Things Merlin Loves About Arthur’s Hands

    Date: 2010-09-07 08:59 pm (UTC)
    ext_41255: (campfire - Merlin and Arthur)
    From: [identity profile] joan-waterhouse.livejournal.com
    All these are completely gorgeous! <3

    But this one's my favourite: The soft beat Arthur’s fingers drum on the side of the tub while Merlin washes his hair. Merlin figures it's a prince's equivalent to purring.
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you so much! ♥

    Mmmm... I love Merlin washing Arthur's hair... *happy sigh*

    Date: 2010-09-08 12:25 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] shutupeccles.livejournal.com
    awww, delovely

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:10 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    *hugs* Thank you! :)

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:26 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com
    Oh, this is lovely. Although I am fixated on Merlin's hands myself!

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:12 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Merlin has gorgeous hands. I'm sure Arthur's noticed. :D

    Thank you!

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:30 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] faeryqueen07.livejournal.com
    This is lovely. It has an almost sleepy quality to it and feels absolutely natural and perfect. Wonderful job.

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:13 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    almost sleepy quality
    awe! thank you... it was written very casually in snippets on a rainy Sunday. I was in a rather ... sleepy mood at the time. :)

    Thanks for the lovely comment.

    Date: 2010-09-08 02:46 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] nannon-yay.livejournal.com
    This is so beautiful. It made my heart all fluttery. ♥

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:14 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    awe! Thank you. :D

    Date: 2010-09-08 03:25 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] prfctdaze.livejournal.com
    Aww...This is so sweet. Just perfect :)

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:14 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    Date: 2010-09-08 04:20 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] cinnatart.livejournal.com
    Gorgeous!

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:14 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you, bb! ♥

    Date: 2010-09-08 05:37 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] isisanubis.livejournal.com
    I think I'm on permenent aww mode for the rest of the night. That was adorable. I think this one is my favortie though: The way they run through Merlin's hair to pluck out a blade of grass or hay only to hold it out, accusing, in front of Merlin nose while Arthur says, “Idiot,” with his cheeks pink and eyes soft. I have this big thing for MOMENTS (that I only discovered due to fanfic), and that was so much win. Thank you for sharing.

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:16 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Awe. Thank you. I was trying to think of a single 'moment' to capture for the prompt of 'hands' and I couldn't pick one. So I went with 10. ;)

    Date: 2010-09-08 06:18 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] becsx.livejournal.com
    Lovely! Very sweet :)

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:17 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you! Glad you liked. :)

    Date: 2010-09-08 11:04 am (UTC)
    angelbabe_cj: Close up of red-haired woman (blackadder - regal and sexy (merlin))
    From: [personal profile] angelbabe_cj
    Awww. Bless Merlin's observation and Arthur's expressive hands. Lovely ficlet.

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:17 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    hee! Yes, they make a great pair. ;)

    Date: 2010-09-08 01:59 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] maya-freyja.livejournal.com
    That was beautiful. Short and yet it portrayed so much... And I kinda wanna have Arthur's hands in my hair as well ;)

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:17 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    And I kinda wanna have Arthur's hands in my hair as well
    ahaha! YES. :D

    Glad you liked it. thanks.

    Date: 2010-09-08 02:08 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com
    Mmm, these are lovely. This is my favourite: The soft beat Arthur’s fingers drum on the side of the tub while Merlin washes his hair. Merlin figures it's a prince's equivalent to purring.

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:34 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    awe! Thank you! ♥♥♥

    Date: 2010-09-08 05:06 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] hermitknut.livejournal.com
    *coos* This is adorable :) Lovely work!
    HK

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:34 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. :)

    Date: 2010-09-08 08:54 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] merlinmonster.livejournal.com
    Aw this is adorable. Love the one about the scar lol

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:35 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    hee! I love that one too. :D

    Thank you!

    Date: 2010-09-08 09:29 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] timetraveller90.livejournal.com
    Awww this was so lovely to read, great job

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:34 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. :)

    Date: 2010-09-09 12:35 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
    Thank you! :D
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