Oh I really liked this very much! I really love your Arthur, how he's protective and just wanting to please Merlin but still so much himself...♥ And Gaius was so funny being all clinical and not noticing something was off with Merlin at all! Gaius went on, now running his fingers up and done the smooth sides of the rod *dies of laughter*
Also, it might just me being silly and English not being my mother tongue, but this sentence: "Merlin was grateful Gaius wasn’t aware of Merlin’s general interest in cocks or Gaius’s might have been giving him a different look. " made me get the impression that Gaius's cock was looking at Merlin... *giggles* I don't think it's quite professional from such a well-respected physician as Gaius. ;)
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Date: 2011-05-06 06:10 pm (UTC)And Gaius was so funny being all clinical and not noticing something was off with Merlin at all!
Gaius went on, now running his fingers up and done the smooth sides of the rod *dies of laughter*
Also, it might just me being silly and English not being my mother tongue, but this sentence: "Merlin was grateful Gaius wasn’t aware of Merlin’s general interest in cocks or Gaius’s might have been giving him a different look.
" made me get the impression that Gaius's cock was looking at Merlin... *giggles* I don't think it's quite professional from such a well-respected physician as Gaius. ;)