*fangirls you madly* Oh, darling, this is just SO, SO perfect! The teasing and the lovemaking were so hot and wonderful, but the part I love best is how you communicate their depth of feeling for one another. I love that Scorpius is intelligent and insightful enough to know that he and Harry don't have a lot of life experience in common right now. And I love that Harry doesn't try to minimize Scorpius' concerns, but makes it clear that he wants him to be part of his future. And Al coming in - OMG! I didn't expect that. But it was perfect. I could feel how conflicted he was about the whole thing, and how much he loves both his dad and his best friend, despite what he considers their "gross" actions. I could feel Scorpius' fear, too, when he thought that Harry might put an end to their relationship because of Al's feelings... And this was so sweet: “Shit,” Al interrupted them. “You’re in love with him.” Harry turned, holding Scorpius close to his back. “Yes. I am.” Harry felt Scorpius stiffen behind him. “Does that make this harder or easier?” “I don’t know.” Al pressed the heel of his hands against his eyes.
And is this really the end? *is greedy* I'd love to see what happens when they reveal their relationship to everyone... *begs* I can't thank you enough for this wonderful story! I've been watching for it every day, and now that it's here, I'm going to go reread it about a hundred more times. Thank you, my friend!!!
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Date: 2009-01-01 08:58 pm (UTC)Oh, darling, this is just SO, SO perfect! The teasing and the lovemaking were so hot and wonderful, but the part I love best is how you communicate their depth of feeling for one another. I love that Scorpius is intelligent and insightful enough to know that he and Harry don't have a lot of life experience in common right now. And I love that Harry doesn't try to minimize Scorpius' concerns, but makes it clear that he wants him to be part of his future. And Al coming in - OMG! I didn't expect that. But it was perfect. I could feel how conflicted he was about the whole thing, and how much he loves both his dad and his best friend, despite what he considers their "gross" actions. I could feel Scorpius' fear, too, when he thought that Harry might put an end to their relationship because of Al's feelings... And this was so sweet:
“Shit,” Al interrupted them. “You’re in love with him.”
Harry turned, holding Scorpius close to his back. “Yes. I am.” Harry felt Scorpius stiffen behind him. “Does that make this harder or easier?”
“I don’t know.” Al pressed the heel of his hands against his eyes.
And is this really the end? *is greedy* I'd love to see what happens when they reveal their relationship to everyone... *begs*
I can't thank you enough for this wonderful story! I've been watching for it every day, and now that it's here, I'm going to go reread it about a hundred more times. Thank you, my friend!!!