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marguerite_26 ([personal profile] marguerite_26) wrote2010-10-26 02:26 pm
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Ficlet: I can feel the butterflies (Harry/Scorpius) PG

Title: I can feel the butterflies
Author: [livejournal.com profile] marguerite_26
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Harry/Scorpius ADW (50/24)
Summary: Coda to To Me You Are the Sea.
Word count: 247 words
A/N For [livejournal.com profile] ships_harry who requested Harry/Scorpius, dawn, 247 words. Happy Birthday, Scarlet. I decided to write this for you because your comments on To Me You Are the Sea really struck a chord with me and this is a direct inspiration of that. Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] snegurochka_lee for looking this over. Title from the same song as the first fic, Norah Jones' "What Am I To You?"
Author’s notes are longer than fic! Oof!



Scorpius woke to the still unfamiliar ticking of Harry’s watch. They’d fallen asleep with Harry’s hand on Scorpius’s cheek; it seemed they had yet to move. As Scorpius regained awareness, the previous day’s events flooded back to him: telling first Albus, then Ginny who’d both been surprised but quietly supportive after having a shot of whiskey and glass of wine, respectively. Harry had handled Lily and James while Scorpius stood behind, silent. During the gathering of the rest of the family, Scorpius had blushed and stammered like a first year through the worst of it, Harry’s strong hand on his shoulder – a gentle reminder that he wasn’t alone, that it was all worth it.

To Scorpius’s surprise, after Sunday dinner Harry had presented each member of the Weasley family – even Teddy (who’d been remarkably dateless) – with a slip of parchment that contained the address to their flat. In one fell swoop, their life together had become public. No one would abuse it, Harry had assured him, but there’d be no more hiding.

Scorpius’s stomach flipped as he remembered it wasn’t over. After breakfast they’d visit the Manor. It would be Scorpius doing the talking this time, Scorpius’s hand on Harry’s shoulder while he explained to his parents.

He lay awake, listening to the ticking, practising his speech until the first morning light snuck through the crack in the curtains.

Scorpius grinned. Lifting the covers, he crawled beneath. It was time to wake Harry for another big day.

[identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com 2010-10-26 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so beautiful! I've always wondered how that next day went as well. Count on Harry to be wonderful, and I love shy, blushing Scorpius. I suspect the day at the Malfoy's isn't going to go quite so smoothly.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Awe! Thank you!

I suspect the day at the Malfoy's isn't going to go quite so smoothly.
hee! indeed. :D

[identity profile] noeon.livejournal.com 2010-10-26 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww. *hugs you*

That's lovely. And I just read 'To Me You Are The Sea' the other day when I was feeling REALLY low. *hugs you again*

Wild lovefest!

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
awe? really? that's so lovely to hear. I'm glad that fic made you feel better.

And I'm glad you liked this little addition, too. ;)

[identity profile] chantefable.livejournal.com 2010-10-26 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. *loves* But I want Scorpius’s hand on Harry’s shoulder! And Draco being all cool and mature about it! Please? More?

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
hee! maybe! someday! :D But Scarlet asked for 247 words and got exactly that. :D

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2010-10-26 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, that was sweet, Maggie. A little calm before the storm, yes? *g*

Edited 2010-10-26 20:02 (UTC)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! yes, I imagine they started off with the easy part. :)

[personal profile] besamislabios 2010-10-26 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww this was very lovely. ♥

I'd love to read Draco's reaction, hee! :-)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
♥ thank you!

Maybe someday I'll write another little something. :D

[identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com 2011-02-10 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHAHAHA!!! YES, now you can write Draco's reaction in this 'verse.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
♥ Thank you! :)

[identity profile] leela-cat.livejournal.com 2010-10-27 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
This is a lovely coda to the original story with a teasing hook at the end, might I add.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Awe! Thank you. :D
Glad you liked.

[identity profile] lilyginny27.livejournal.com 2010-10-27 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I can't wait for Draco's reaction.

Very lovely. Even re-reading the original, I still have slight tears in my eyes for Scorpius in this.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Even re-reading the original, I still have slight tears in my eyes for Scorpius in this.

♥♥♥

awe! thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this little addition, and even more pleased that the original was worth a re-read. :D

[identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com 2010-10-27 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
:D :D :D

It's so lovely to see Scorpius happy this way. I'm glad Harry did the right thing by him. And also wonderful to have another glimpse into this world.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
♥♥♥

Thank you so much, darling! It was fun to slide back into that world and remember these two. *happy sigh*

[identity profile] scarletscarlet.livejournal.com 2010-10-27 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
IT IS LOVELY LOVELY THANK YOU!

Plus, context of original fic, nom. And aren't you clever getting the wordcount spot on?

Ah, awesomeness. Thank you *very* much <3.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-10-28 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you. ♥ I'm so pleased that you liked it! It was fun to get back into the headspace of these two.

Spot on word count is the hardest part. LOL.

You are very welcome. It was my pleasure.

[identity profile] snarkyscorp.livejournal.com 2011-01-14 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
;-; awww how did I miss this bit of loveliness? Absolutely adore this, nearly as much as the original. You just need to keep writing them. Promise me you will never stop D:!

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2011-09-06 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so sorry I missed replying to it! <3
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[personal profile] kitty_fic 2011-02-19 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
A lovely happy ending! I so wanted to know what happened next! <3

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2011-09-06 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
:DD

Thank you, sweetie! (sorry I'm a billion years behind on replying)

[identity profile] bouncy72.livejournal.com 2011-09-06 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, I feel kinda teary after that. I'm SO glad that it went well & i hope Draco is as accepting *nervously shivers*.
Thanks for the ficlet :)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2011-09-06 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
awe! thanks! glad you liked.

[identity profile] flo999.livejournal.com 2013-01-15 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Coming back to atone for previous non-commenting fail :)

To Me You Are The Sea (inc this brilliant coda) is one of my favourite fics and I've just reread once again. Its a wonderful story and makes me happy every time I come back to it, thank you!