Week 2 Next Gen LDWS

[marguerite_26]

The results are up for week 2 of next_gen_ldws. Thanks to everyone who voted. If you haven't yet, go check out the great drabbles. It was a fantastic week, my favourite was in fact the winner: #7 Moonlight Sonata by loony4lupin. But yeah, at least five other drabbles were very close seconds.

My entry:
Title: He's Worth It
Author: marguerite_26
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Warnings: Teddy/Victoire, rough sex
Notes: Thanks to asnowyowl for the beta.
This week's prompt was Victoire Weasley and wolf charm


He's Worth It

"Be careful, ma petite," her mother had said. "That one has wolf's blood."

Victoire had her rebuttal at the ready. "And Papa?"

"It is not the same. I loved him first." Her mother's eyes were bright as she stroked Victoire's hair. In a cracked whisper, she added, "It is not a life I would choose for you. He will hurt you; he cannot help it."

0oo0

He was trying to be gentle, but the moon was only a day off full. Fuelled with teenage lust and preternatural hunger, he pinned her to a desk in an abandoned classroom.

One hand held her down by the back of her neck, the other bruised her hip as he rutted into her. The unfinished wood scratched her cheek raw with each punishing thrust.

His needy grunts drowned out her sobs.

0oo0

Back in the Ravenclaw Tower, she showered until the water ran cold.

She stood in front of the mirror, naked and shivering. A small purple-blue wolf bloomed just above her cleavage. She ran a finger across the bruise and more tears dripped off her trembling jaw.

It was proof, even more than the pendent he'd given her. He loved her. He was worth it.

She said it again and again, just to be sure she didn't forget.

fin


ps: Happy Mother's Day! I seriously hope it was better than mine. -_-

Comments

[nolagal.livejournal.com]

For the record, I had your drabble correct, but I didn't vote for it. I voted for looney4lupins, I was down to three, yours, snarkys and hers and I swore i voted for yours but when I went back to check I realized that um apparently I had not.

I so adored this. I love Victoire fingering the bruise!

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

Hee!!! Thanks for picking mine, anyway! :D

I'm really impressed that you guessed it was mine.

I love Victoire fingering the bruise!
actually that was the image that drove me to write this fic.

[symetric.livejournal.com]

God, that's powerful. *shivers*

*hugs* sorry your MD didn't go so well but Happy Mother's Day anyway. :)

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! These drabbles are really fun trying to get some real emotion in there.

and thanks for the Happy Mother's Day! ♥

[tray-la-la.livejournal.com]

oh, this was just gorgeous! *shivers* i agree there were so many great ones this week - victoire clearly brings out the dark in everyone!

sorry you had a rough mother's day, dear. :( *huggles*

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

Thanks Tray!

I was really surprised with all the dark drabbles after last week with so many gen Teddy fics, Victoire had a totally different feel. I cannot wait to read all the James fics!! :D

*hugs*

[secretsolitaire.livejournal.com]

Ouch. Very powerful drabble. :-(

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

*pets you*

Victoire is awfully pretty when she cries! :D

Thanks, hun.

[melusinahp.livejournal.com]

Oh, I liked this one. *shivers*

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

YAY! Thank you! *hugs you (gently)*

[softly-sweetly.livejournal.com]

*squishes*

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

*gropes you*

[piratesmile331.livejournal.com]

I loved your fic, although I also voted for Moonlight Sonata. We're such slashers at heart!

I had a horrible Mother's Day last year, so I can commiserate. I just wanted to kill my kids by the end of the day. They were really insensitive and hurtful. This year was better, but I still couldn't get them to clean up after dinner. *headdesk*

[marguerite-26.livejournal.com]

Moonlight Sonata was great. I liked it better, too. :D

Sorry to hear about last year. yikes! Mother's Day wasn't so much the kids fault this year. By 8am, I had a broken water heater (I discovered when I went to shower!) and the eldest had a stomach bug... also discovered the hard way. ugh. A bazillion loads of laundry and scrubbing puke from the couch... not exactly breakfast in bed. :/