marguerite_26: (Merlin - eat it)
marguerite_26 ([personal profile] marguerite_26) wrote2010-05-03 03:50 pm
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FIC: The Honeycomb (Arthur/Merlin) PG

Title: The Honeycomb
Author: [livejournal.com profile] marguerite_26
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Merlin/Arthur
Summary: The stocks would be occupied for the next eternity just as soon as Arthur laid eyes on his godforsaken manservant.
Warnings: none
Word Count: 700
Author's Notes: Happy Birthday to my dear friend [livejournal.com profile] stellamoon. No matter how close we've become in the last couple years, I will never stop fangirling you, darling. Stella's prompt for this was 'candy.'
Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] ella_bane for the super quick beta and to [livejournal.com profile] melusinahp for helping tighten this thing up.



The Honeycomb


Merlin was the worst manservant in the history of the history of manservants. Arthur spun around a corner. He was momentarily winded as his chest flattened an unwary squire. Pausing only to shout, "Watch where you're going," he strode on, more determined than ever. Arthur was momentarily tempted to send the lad to the stocks. It might soothe his harried nerves a touch, but he remembered that the stocks would be occupied for the next eternity just as soon as he laid eyes on his godforsaken manservant.

Three hours later, his brow soaked with sweat from the dozens of steps he'd ascended and descended, the plethora of corridors and alcoves he'd searched, he finally found Merlin.

Merlin sat, oblivious to his pending doom, in the shade afforded by a small copse of trees behind the castle. He turned his face towards the breeze with a slow smile. Arthur's heart pounded beneath his damp tunic, his throat dry, the litany of insults he'd had at the ready vanishing from his mind. Stocks, he reminded himself. Merlin had done… something. What the transgression had been was wiped clear of his memory as the wind picked up and the creases around Merlin's eye deepened with his smile. No man had a right to look so utterly content.

Arthur froze, unable to break the enchantment of the moment.

Merlin's hand rose to his lips and his teeth nipped at the golden honeycomb he held in his fingers. The honey dripped free, sliding down to his open mouth, drizzling his lips and chin. He laughed, that familiar self-deprecating chuckle, his Adam's apple bobbing free of his ridiculous neckerchief. He wiped his thumb the length of his chin and slipped it between his lips, suckling. The wet, dirty noise carried the distance between them.

Arthur felt his own tongue slide across his own dry, honeyless lips. He must have made a noise then, a whimper of disappointment or groan of longing, because Merlin turned to him, eyes wide.

"Arthur!"

Merlin should have looked guilty, both for the first thing, the one that had Arthur storming through the castle like a boar tearing through the underbrush, or at least for the other, despoiling a honeycomb in broad daylight for all to see. But instead of begging for forgiveness, head bowed in shame, Merlin smiled at Arthur, seemingly pleased to have been found. He licked his fingers, eyes twinkling with pleasure.

"I found an abandoned hive! It’s been years since I've had honeycomb." He held out a morsel to Arthur. And suddenly Arthur sympathised with Adam, and the temptation that had been impossible to resist.

Arthur watched the honey drip from Merlin's outstretched fingers to the grass. He closed his eyes and swallowed hard. Then, without a conscious thought to move, he closed the distance, and Merlin's long fingers were in his mouth, sweet and sticky with honey. The unique texture of the wax aroused his tongue, firm but yielding.

"Good, yeah?" Merlin rasped, his voice thicker than it had been moments before.

Arthur whimpered. Duty and station were forgotten, his head swimming in the almost sickly sweet smell of the slivers of honeycomb gathered in a pile atop Merlin's spread neckerchief. His eyes flickered over Merlin's face, so familiar and yet foreign in a way Arthur didn't think he'd ever understand. A dribble of honey remained on Merlin's bottom lip and Arthur didn't think; he leaned forward and swiped his tongue along the mess, licking and nipping, devouring the decadent taste of Merlin and honey.

Merlin deserved an eternity in the stocks for enchanting the crown prince, but that could wait until tomorrow.

~fin

[identity profile] dysonrules.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
YANNO, EVEN THE SMELL OF HONEY MAKES ME GAG, BUT THIS WAS SO MUCH GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH.

*happy sigh*

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not a huge fan of honey either, tbh. :D

But I LOVE the concept of someone else thinking it's hot. *snickers*
Thanks for reading, sweetie!!! *tackles*

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[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
That was hot :)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!!! ♥

[identity profile] accioscar.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG!!

FINGERS!!

SUCKING!!

*DIES*


[identity profile] dysonrules.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*points up*

What she said.

(esp the crossed out bit)

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[identity profile] deerang2002.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Huh...I love honey, but all of a sudden, I'm craving the honey that comes from a honeycomb, wax and all...

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! honeycombs FTW. :D
I've never eaten it to be honest. But the concept of the texture and taste is really alluring. Thanks for reading! *twirls you*

[identity profile] mysecretashes.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, yummy! And I don't mean the honey. :D

Am totally thirding the Bradley/Colin.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! *licks*

ha! not you, too!!! LOL. I will give in soon enough. Though maybe just to devour the lovely ficage - I don't know about writing. :D

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[identity profile] stellamoon.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Candy, indeed! That was just way hotter than I was imagining when I gave you that prompt!

Seriously, that was scorchingly hot! Dripping honey? Ouch!!!! I have a desperate NEED to see Bradley and Colin act out this scene!!!!

Thank you so much for writing that!
*squeezes you til your stuffing pops out*

Edited to say that I actually thought this was porn until I came back and noticed the PG rating!! LOL!! Sure felt like porn!!
Edited 2010-05-03 21:19 (UTC)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!!! My hour of research on candy in arthurian times turned up Honeycomb and ... not much else. So the choice was easy. :D

I'm so, so pleased you liked it. I wanted something hot and sweet, just for you. Then it turned out very PG and I was little worried I missed out on the 'hot' bit. LOL.

Happy Birthday, my dear stella. ♥

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sitting in the car dealership waiting room reading Merlin porn, yay!

Maggie, you are the queen of filthy food pornz! I got to the end and was like 'Nooooooooo, she can't stop here!' LOL

You're two Merlin ficlets up on me. I must catch up! Loved the finger sucking, omg ♥

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY for car dealership porn! :D

'Nooooooooo, she can't stop here!' hahahaha! well, I think I finally have my last writing commitment nearly out the door and maybe I can write a Merlin/Arthur with some actual sex in it. :D

Thanks, dear.

[identity profile] cinnatart.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
mmmmmmmm fingers, licking, sticky, messy I LIKE IT! \o/

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*licks you*
thank you, darling.

[identity profile] phoenixacid.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
asjllkl;k;sdljkkajsl!!

*iz incoherent mess*

*plz see icon to decipher*

*ngggh*

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! You are too kind. :D

[identity profile] mpoetess.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
So totally stocks-worthy. *nods*

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
hee!

happy belated birthday, MP!!! ♥

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[identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 08:43 am (UTC)(link)
Mmph, oh yes. This is so gorgeously sensual. I can practically taste the honey and feel Merlin's fingers in my mouth. So much beauty in so few words. ♥

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*licks you*

thank you for all your help. You're opinion means the world to me. ♥

[identity profile] marchionessdusk.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE honeycomb. And I love YOU for writing this!
Arthur forgetting what he was punishing Merlin = win *snickers*
*licks Merlin and Arthur* mmmmmmm...
Wonderful story!! (write moar!)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! *feels the love*

Thank you so much. I will write a MOAR, just as soon as I get an HP fic finished. :D

[identity profile] archaeologist-d.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved that Arthur was looking for Merlin and Merlin was just enjoying the moment. Very cute!

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Merlin who is just oblivious to his responsibilities sometimes and just steals a moment because he can. :D

Thanks so much. glad you liked it.

[identity profile] 1nagromniloc.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Very very cute :)
I love how Arthur's brain is switched off for the moment heee.
Think with me it would be the same if I had been Arthur lol..

Thank you :)

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! Thanks for reading! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 12:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Nom nom nom. NOM!

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! Thank you. :DDD

[identity profile] chantefable.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet!!! *adores*

BTW, Teddy and James are getting there, all right, I keep telling them to just go for it but they want to actually PLAY QUIDDITCH first! Honestly. Boys.

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[identity profile] hermitknut.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahh, this is the definition of squee :D Adorable and sweet!
HK

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Awe! Thanks for the great comment. :D

[identity profile] hungry-bkworm91.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH!!!!
Honey! finger sucking! messy sticky kisses!... *faints*
So craving me some honey now!!! ;D

loved it! XD

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams*

I'm thrilled it hit your buttons. :D

(omg, I typed 'hit your bottom' three times before I finally got 'buttons' out. LOL)
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[identity profile] seekintoyou.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel like having honey now. With a side of Bradley/Colin. *sigh* See what you did?!lol Nice work! xD

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
nngh. I would pay good money to see Bradley/Colin/Honey.

Thanks for reading! glad you liked. :D

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[identity profile] keitn.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Finger....lick...*THUD*

You are a LICKING goddess! :D

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!!!

*dances around in goddess crown* :D

Thanks so much. I'm thrilled you liked it.

[identity profile] cabernet-shiraz.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Yum. :9

And suddenly Arthur sympathised with Adam, and the temptation that had been impossible to resist.

Hee! Nice one! :D

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] mangacat201.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGgggggggggh. shouldn't be so dirty. shouldn#t think it was so dirty. Really. GUH
Cat

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
shouldn't be so dirty.

lol. no it shouldn't. and yet. I had it as NC-17 and then my beta said... well... not really. LOL.

Thanks for reading! :D

[identity profile] dk323.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
This was really hot. :) Loved how you used honey here - and how Arthur, despite how frustrated he was with Merlin for having to spend all that time looking for him, could not resist the temptation of honey + Merlin. I liked the image of Arthur licking off Merlin's fingers. ♥

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for this lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed the fic. :D

[identity profile] riventhorn.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, Merlin "despoiling a honeycomb"--loved it :) And just how relaxed and happy Merlin was and how Arthur couldn't resist him!

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for this lovely comment. Glad you liked it. :D

[identity profile] chrisvel.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm yes - with the honey and the finger sucking ... so very hot ...
Love how Arthur forgot about everything once he sees Merlin :-)
Very understandable.

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets poor helpless Arthur* :D

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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