PM me your email and I'll create a gdoc.
We can start copying over the comments. It might take a bit because there are quite a few!

Then we can each review, add transitions and stuff that got missed.

Also fix the POVs. I think we sometimes switched to Arthur's which is likely a bit jarring if we have it in a formal fic. y/n?

There's no rush though. We can poke at it as we have free time. And then post it as a collab when it's ready.