marguerite_26 | dvd commentary meme

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dvd commentary meme

dvd commentary meme

Name one of my fics in comments and I will tell you what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the characters' heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

okay... no guarantees that these will be funny or entertaining in any way, but if you are interested or had specific questions I will try to um... talk about my writing a stuff.

HP and Merlin fics are both welcome.

stolen from sheswatching
[I don't do tagging and stuff... so if you'd like to do this meme. DOOOO IIIIIT!!]

Okay. I did Savage - The Marking Scene OMG! tl;dr - totally self-indulgent. but I had fun. :)

I will get to the others tomorrow. I'm off for the night. Cheers!

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The need for more was impossible to ignore. It pulsed through his body with the frantic beat of his heart. He opened his mouth and flat-tongued, he licked Potter's hand -- heel of the palm to tip of the fingers.

I love how much of DOG response this is. Not really sexual out of context and quite weird. And very much what dog would do to communicate something. And so intimate and Harry 'lets him' which speaks volumes. (so I don't have to! Less typing!)

Potter gasped, pulled his hand away and stared at it a moment before looking back at Draco. His eyes flickered over Draco's face as if an answer might be written there.

Draco could smell the musky scent of arousal pouring off him.

Smelling arousal – reason number 1 to write creature fics. Also something I really missed from my btvs days. LOVE LOVE LOVE that when you deal with creatures the do weird intimate shit like lick your HAND and smell your arousal so that you can't hide (and the author doesn't have to do the whole 'his eyes flickered to Harry's crotch and saw the bulge there' thing).
And Draco's had a really rough couple of days at this point. The least he could get is the knowledge that Harry wants him after getting his hand licked.

"Did you just… mark me?"

Draco's cheeks burned. But the wolf's need had been undeniable and now the next time Potter saw Teddy, Teddy would know. Would understand.

Potter's neck flushed, red creeping from his collar and spreading upwards.

Draco thought he might leave him there to hang for the evening as punishment, or something else. Instead, Potter waved his wand to release Draco and stumbled out the door before Draco's feet hit the floor.

I wanted to make this as much about TEDDY as about Harry, Draco wants Harry as 'his' – staking him as property. But also wants Teddy to feel that jealousy that Draco felt a minute ago.

And Harry blushing at his own response and fleeing! Clearly to wank himself raw (with his still wet hand) for the rest of the night. :)))

Hope that was the sort of thing you were looking for. Sorry for the tl;dr!!!!

GUH it was exactly what I was looking for. *g*

And yes to harry being so overwhelmed and aroused adn RUNNING when just a second ago he had Draco all tied up because of politics and danger and now he's just nothing but turned on and he has to run.

I FUCKING LOVE THIS FIC!

Ok, this was not tl;dr, it was Fabulously Meaty; Compulsory Reading :).

Love this idea! Reading some of the background stuff for this excellent story makes me so happy :).

I also love the ellipsis in Harry's question, which falls under my total and utterly undeniable THING for well-written dialogue (hello, marked´-by-own-thesis...), because the rhythm is just right, and it follows Harry's natural speech pattern so well. /dialogue obsession

And also. It's hot. That scene.

Guh. That scene. That SCENE totally... yeah. I loved it. That's totally my kind of scene, baby!

I still remember how everyone was linking this fic to me. "Nessa, ready this, you'll love it!" and I DID!

Your commentary, or rather the first couple lines of it, just made me read the fic and OMFG how I loooove the boys being all territorial. Ungh. So hot. The marking scene as well as the one when Draco and Ernie first meet and Draco's all about protecting Harry. Rawr!

Read the whole commentary right after finishing and loved it, too. Great to get some background info and to know what you thought while writing. :D

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SAVAGE - Marking Scene IV

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