OMG this was just SO GOOD ! Now I can't totally believe this was a sneak peek in series 4, all of it fits and you're writing is absolutely incredible !
I just love the way you wrote everything from the new time with Arthur as acting King and all the things he has to face after "winning" Cendred's lands, how he kept as council the people who were there to help gain Camelot back.
I also love that he asked Geoffrey for the meanings of the markings on the table and that it led to Merlin's reveal, i really think that the way you wrote it is absolutely believable. I was expecting maybe that Arthur would remember ghettir's word about Courage, Strength and Magic but it was still good. I also think it's great that you had Hunith say these words to Arthur, it took my breath away just to read this line and once again I really believe that it could happen this way.
Lancelot/Gwen Wow ! I so love the way you wrote this and how Arthur is realizing that Gwen believes she's not free to chose what she wants and so decides to let her decide. I think that even if I really don't like A/G and will never get it, it really would make sense that Arthur loving her would let her chose.
I also loved that Arthur realized he had never really known what love is and discovered it with Merlin. That's always the way it is in my mind. That he hasn't just found out yet what he is truly missing.
Gosh, if this was a real sneak peek at series 4 then it would be so good ! I hope they'll do as good as you did :)
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Now I can't totally believe this was a sneak peek in series 4, all of it fits and you're writing is absolutely incredible !
I just love the way you wrote everything
from the new time with Arthur as acting King and all the things he has to face after "winning" Cendred's lands, how he kept as council the people who were there to help gain Camelot back.
I also love that he asked Geoffrey for the meanings of the markings on the table and that it led to Merlin's reveal, i really think that the way you wrote it is absolutely believable. I was expecting maybe that Arthur would remember ghettir's word about Courage, Strength and Magic but it was still good.
I also think it's great that you had Hunith say these words to Arthur, it took my breath away just to read this line and once again I really believe that it could happen this way.
Lancelot/Gwen Wow ! I so love the way you wrote this and how Arthur is realizing that Gwen believes she's not free to chose what she wants and so decides to let her decide. I think that even if I really don't like A/G and will never get it, it really would make sense that Arthur loving her would let her chose.
I also loved that Arthur realized he had never really known what love is and discovered it with Merlin. That's always the way it is in my mind. That he hasn't just found out yet what he is truly missing.
Gosh, if this was a real sneak peek at series 4 then it would be so good !
I hope they'll do as good as you did :)