ext_391858: (D/s Draco || h/d)
JaD ([identity profile] jad.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] marguerite_26 2011-01-20 02:09 pm (UTC)

Harry/Draco/Ron

Starting Word Count: ~4,700
New Word Count: 6,694

So I actually wrote more, but THEN I heard back from my kink-beta and was like woah, she's right, WTFAREYOUDOINGSTOOPID, and had to go delete a bunch, and I'm still re-arranging and trying to make it all work. D/s IS FUCKING MY MIND UP SOMETHING INSANE.

Why can't I just write PWP? MY LIFE WOULD BE SO MUCH SIMPLER.

My work is: Still in progress
Snippet: SOME PORN (NOT REALLY) FOR YOU:

*

Harry stepped back toward the couch and crooked a finger.

“You're not the only one wanting here, you know,” Malfoy snapped, reading his intentions.

Harry's eyes flickered momentarily to Malfoy's erection, swollen and dark between his bent knees. “And I give a shit, why?”

Malfoy narrowed his eyes but didn't move.

Ron stood up and looked up at Harry. “I've got a better idea,” he said, and Malfoy's head snapped back to his direction, looking apprehensive. “Get up.”

“Bite me.”

“If that's what you're into.”

*

SO MUCH PORN SO LITTLE TIME. I need about seven more hours to the day.

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