geoviki ([identity profile] geoviki.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] marguerite_26 2009-02-19 03:56 pm (UTC)

Wow! Brilliant little story, both the idea and the execution. I was totally taken by surprise by that twist. It's the perfect length too, which is something I always have trouble figuring out for my own stories.
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