I knew it wasn't your favourite when I posted the link but I love that Draco so - and I do like the curve of his neck! It's that whole line, bent neck into back into bum... But yes, very very lickable! And you're too hard on yourself about Harry. But I'm probably biased. There are very few of your versions of the boys that I don't adore beyond reason. In fact, I can't really think of any at all... lol

But that's okay, I know what you mean. I kind of feel that way about my fic Summer Boys. I know people like it quite a bit and there are parts of it I love too but when I read it, I just see all the awkward parts, so when people rec it I'm like "NO! I can do better! Read this instead!" lol