pir8fancier pointed to that first link after the World Cup stating that this is what she followed for On One's Knees. (gabe's her beta) And I was all (!!!) there are rules that we can follow? We don't have to read and re-read On One's Knees to try to figure out how she got the flow just right... Cool!!! (not that I minded the re-reads but the tears always made the sentence structure all blurry).

I'm so glad these interest you. Learning with p0rn is FuN!! :D