It's like a crusade... with porn! *lolololololol* Best kind of crusade, in my opinion!
I could tell from what you'd written that Scorpius wanted to be off doing other things ("always looking for the next great high"), but there was still the sense that he had maybe wanted Harry to come with him, but Harry's responsibilities, and his inabilily to come to terms with their age difference had split them up. The sentence about going to America made it clear that Scorpius just wanted to travel (and that he hadn't left to be with someone else). And YAY! for the hopeful ending; I don't do angst very well, especially when it involves my favourite boys.
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*lolololololol* Best kind of crusade, in my opinion!
I could tell from what you'd written that Scorpius wanted to be off doing other things ("always looking for the next great high"), but there was still the sense that he had maybe wanted Harry to come with him, but Harry's responsibilities, and his inabilily to come to terms with their age difference had split them up. The sentence about going to America made it clear that Scorpius just wanted to travel (and that he hadn't left to be with someone else). And YAY! for the hopeful ending; I don't do angst very well, especially when it involves my favourite boys.